When writing about a new feature, product, etc. the first two questions I want answered before anything else are what is it? and how can I play with it?. I first encountered this construction in one (or both?) of two books I had as a child, Explorabook and Earthsearch.

What is it?

  • One to two sentences, bolded.
  • Written for a general audience, and appears “above the fold”
  • Readers immediately can judge whether they care about your thing, and pass on it if not

How do I play with it?

  • Immediate call to action
  • Lets a curious reader jump right in before having to read a bunch of context
  • Allows for a curious audience to get a real feel for the capabilities of the thing, not just read about it
  • Proves usefulness. This section is a good bellwether for whether the thing is actually useful. If you can’t demonstrate usefulness, maybe it isn’t actually useful.
  • Actually works. This section can be sample code, a link to a demo or a quickstart guide, but importantly you need to make sure it actually works.

Example

What is it?

We’ve launched a new data model domain.daily_summary, containing daily rollups of metric X by entity Y and bucketed attributes.

How do I play with it?

SELECT
  date,
  SUM(metric_x) AS total_metric_x
FROM
  domain.daily_summary
WHERE
  entity_y_id IN (1, 2, 3)
GROUP BY 1

Click [here] to open a sample query!

More context

  • Important context 1

So what?

When I’m announcing something at work, I will paste in these two questions as draft headings before starting to write. The headings may change, and there may be more content afterwards, but I try to make sure the audience can answer these two questions within the first paragraph.